As I suspected, the form is not opening because of this line:
dc.Command = 'execute "dbo"."VCS_SP_Remaining_Pays" ', "{d \'" + HireDateV + "'}" ', ' + Remainingpays + ' output';
Here you have a comma where you should have a plus sign:
Remaining_Pays" ', "{d \'"
And here you have two separate strings with nothing joining them:
"'}" ', '
If you put plus signs in those two places, the form will open.
However, there are still a few issues.
After looking at the stored procedure I can see that your colleague has modified the stored procedure to accept HireDate as an nvarchar and convert it to a date, so that means you do not need the {d } bit anymore.
Also, you are passing in the value of the Remainingpays field, but the server will expect an SQL variable there since it is an output parameter.
Please try the following and let me know if the query executes without an error:
dc.Command =
'DECLARE @remainingPays smallint '
+
'EXECUTE "dbo"."VCS_SP_Remaining_Pays" \'' + HireDateV + '\', @remainingPays OUTPUT '
+
'SELECT @remainingPays as RemainingPays';